P4 - Script Second Draft
In the second draft, I added three more pages which wrapped up the first scene and started the next. I also made some minor additions to what I'd already written, adding adjectives or additional descriptive sentences (e.g. page 1 adding 'traditional' to 'café' and 'worn' to 'café booth') and mentioning the episode number and name on the title page. This was due to some brief client feedback that I'd received that suggested I clarify those details.
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